改写雅思小作文题目的办法。很多同掌握在雅思写作考试中忽视雅思小作文的影响,其实雅思写作小作文在雅考虑试中还是有着非常大有哪些用途的,尤其是雅思小作文当中的图表题,假如学会了办法,得分还是比较容易的,雅思写作小作文题干假如改写的好,那样分数一定不会低,下面是记者收拾的改写雅思小作文题目的办法,期望对你有用!
改写雅思小作文题目的办法一
雅思小作文图表题题型包含线图、饼图、柱状图和表格这四种题型,外加一种组合图,譬如考试时同时出现一张线图,和一张柱状图。无论是写哪一种图形,大家在考试时,第一句话永远都是改写题干。这就是小作文的固定套路,也是一个得分点。但笔者在实质教学时发现,有不少同学不了解怎么样去改,改什么地方,那样今天大家就来仔细谈一下怎么样提升这一部分。要了解,题干改写是文章的开头第一句话,一个好的开头是高分的一半。大家拿考试真题来举例:
剑3考试真题:The graph blew shows the unemployment rates in the US and Japan between March 1993 and March 1999.
以上这句话是考试时所给的题干,不少没经过培训的同学看到这种题干就会照抄,如此做当然会扣分。因此,大家在备考时,大伙需要总结如此的题干应该怎么样去改写,如总结题干中的show大家如何处置,题干中的时间表达between March 1993 and March 1999应该怎么样去改写。
The graph indicates the jobless rates in the US and Japan from March 1993 to March 1999.
大伙会发现,高分同学的改法,基本将原来的题干主语,谓语,和宾语部分都做了改写,并同时维持语法正确,语意没变化,句型精练不罗嗦。将原来的show改成了indicate并注意加了第三人称‘s’。特别应该注意的是,高分同学需要考虑失业率the unemployment rates怎么样去改写更好,让我们的语言尽量地道。但,不少同学为了追求华丽用词,反而会越改越错,假如实在吃不准我们的用词,建议不要作太大改动,将能改动的时间和show尽量改掉,其余的还是保留,特别是仅需考5.5分已经足够的同学。毕竟让考官了解你在写什么,才是非常重要的。
需要考5.5分,基础非常差的同学可以参考。
The graph indicates the unemployment rates in the US and Japan from March 1993 to March 1999.
虽然改动得不多,不可以加太多分,但毕竟没错误,如此可以保住开头第一句很好,至少语法分是不会被扣了。考试时,大伙可依据我们的水平,衡量采取什么版本,但在平常,大家还是应该多积累高分版本的改法。
反面教程,请大伙引以为戒,不要犯类似错误。
The graph below show the unemployment rate in the US and Japan during 7 years from March 1993 to March 1999.
不了解细心的同学有没发现,这个开头存在不少小错误,下面大家来简单剖析一下。
常见问题1、below。这个below其实是不需要写的,大伙想一下,考官出题的时候题干下面放了一张图。但考生在写作文的时候,文章下面有图吗?因此这个below建议去掉。
常见问题2、show。不少语法不好的同学必须要注意,这个词粗看仿佛没那些问题,不少同学看到这个词,以为它是错在照抄了题干。其实不然,细心的同掌握发现这句话主语是The graph第三人称单数,而谓语动词写的却是show, 有最基本的语法错误,应该改为shows。
常见问题3、句子中将年份数错,误以为93年也算一年,因此算成了7年,这个大伙必须要小心,其实跨度是6年。另外,时间状语完全可以写得简单一点,无需添加during … years。可以将这个“在…年间”放在第二句话的开头,用来引出第一段第二句话的总趋势。比如:
The graph indicates the jobless rates in the US and Japan from March 1993 to March 1999. Over the span of six years, the US rate experienced a downward trend while Japan saw an opposite trend.
以下笔者再提供一些容易见到的开头形式:
1. 假如表格的数据较多,大家就能如此改写:
The table gives information about…
The table provides the details regarding the underground rail way systems in six cities.
2. 直接描述比率或数目
The chart shows the percentage of British households with a range of consumer durables from 1972 to 1983.
3. 遇见地图题或步骤图大家可以如此改:
The diagram illustrates how the village changed from 1970 to 2000
朗阁国外考试研究中心建议考生们在备考时要多总结题干的改写办法,总结有关的用词,在考试时,在尽量保证很好的基础上,再去追求高分,相信肯定能在开头给考官留下一个好印象。
改写雅思小作文题目的办法二
改写题目作为开头段
题目:
The chart below gives information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010.
改变从目前开始:
1. the chart——the bar chart
2. gives——illustrates
3. information——statistical information
4. on关于——regarding
5. percentage——diverse proportion
6. British——UK
7. people giving money to charity——people who gave money to charity——donating money to charity
8. age range——different age groups
9. for the years 1990 and 2010——in two respective years: 1990 and 2010
见证奇迹的时刻:
The bar chart illustrates statistical information regarding the diverse proportion of people in UK donating money to charity by different age groups in two respective years: 1990 and 2010.
让世界看到你的改变:亲自动手DIY你一个人的开头段
训练1:
The chart below gives information about Southland’s main exports in 2000, *20.., and future projections for 2025.
训练2:
The pie chart below shows the online shopping sales for retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013.
训练3:
The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Newport city centre from 2003-2012.
让主体段摆脱单调从改变主语开始::
The table gives a breakdown of the different types of family who were living in poverty in Australia in 1999.
On average, 11% of all households, comprising almost two million people, were in this position. However, those consisting of only one parent or a single adult had almost double this proportion of poor people, with 21% and 19% respectively.
Couples generally tended to be better off, with lower poverty levels for couples without children than those with children . It is noticeable that for both types of household with children, a higher than average proportion were living in poverty at this time.
Older people were generally less likely to be poor, though once again the trend favoured elderly couples rather than single elderly people .
Overall the table suggests that households of single adults and those with children were more likely to be living in poverty than those consisting of couples.
在文章里面画出所有句子的主语大家不难发现,主语可以是数字,代词,题中名词,比重词。那样大家也可以分别用到各类主语来变化大家的句式哦!
改写雅思小作文题目的办法三
第一步:找关键字
通常来讲关键字包含“名动形副”。根据此规律,本题目
The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002
其关键字有: table ; give; information; consumer spending; different items; different countries;
第二步:四变
改写开头段,可总结出四大改变。
一变词性:改变词性,如将形容词变成名词,名词变成动词。
原题:The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.
改写:the table below shows information on how much consumers spend on different items in five different countries in 2002.
原题中“spending”是名词, 改写成“spend”,变成了动词, 从而成功改写了整个句子。
二变地方:将原题中的一些关键字地方进行调整,从而改变句式,改写句子。
Given is a table showing the information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002
将动词“give”提前,从而将开头段变成了一个倒装句。
三变关键字: 关键字同义替换
The graph below illustrates data on consumer expenditure on various categories in five different nations in 2002.
将table变成graph, 将show变成illustrate,将different items 换成various categories,近义词替换,从而成功地进行了改写。
容易见到的关键字同义替换有:
Table:chart/graph/line graph/bar graph/pie graph/statistics/data/diagram/illustration/flowchart/map
Give:demonstrate/describe/present/show/compare/illustrate
information about=the proportion/percentage of… the number/amount of/ changes/ variations/ how 引导的名词性从句
四变内容: 将原题中的概括内容换成具体内容,或者将原题中的具体内容变成概括内容
如将different items这种概括性的内容变成具体内容“ three categories。将five different countries 换成Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden and Turkey。
The graph below illustrates information on on consumer expenditure on three categories in five different countries in 2002.
改写雅思小作文题目的办法四
TEST3的题目:
The chart below shows information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989.
再来看给出的6.5分范本
This chart gives information about the percentage change in average house prices in five different cities located in five different countries over 12 year period between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average houses in 1989.
出路倒是有一条,那就是“句型变化+词语改变”,措辞改变大伙非常不错理解,句型变化是大伙以前极少想到去做的,其实句型变化非常简单,一般题目The table shows后面给出的一般是一个名词性的词组,大家把它改成句子即可,句型和词语双变化,改写就容易充分了:
The given diagram indicates that how the real estate market in five major cities around the world changed from 1989 to the period between 1990 and 2002.
句型变化:名词性词组changes变为how…changed…
词语变化:this chart变为the given diagram
average house prices变为the real estate market
in five different cities后面添加around the world
between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989变为from 1989 to the period between 1990 and 2000
同时大家也可以作另外一种改写:
普通的题目是The graph shows…,改为The information given by the graph is about…则非常随便的改换了句型表达。
再看几个示例
示例 1
题目
The table below shows the proportion of different categories of family living in poverty in Australia in 1999.
改写一
The table illustrates what percentage of Australian families among various kinds lived in poverty in 1999.
改写二
The information given by the table is about the percentage of poor families in Australia coming from various backgrounds in 1990.
示例 2
题目
The chart below shows the different levels of post-school qualification in Australia and the proportion of men and women who held them in 1999.
改写一
The bar chart demonstrates how many males and females in Australia in 1999 held various post-school diplomas.
改写二
The information provided by this bar chart is about the percentage of Australian males and females holding the various post-school diplomas.
示例 3
题目
The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries.
改写
The line graph above demonstrates how much water used in three areas changed from 1990 to 2000 while the data coming from the below table is about consumption in two different countries – Brazil and Congo.
两个图表的题目最好写了,可以一个写成从句,一个以The information given by the table is about…来改写。